To a Lady That Desired I Would Love Her

Since you've bestowed me consent to love,
How will you do?
Will I your mirth, or passion arouse,
Once I commence pursue;
Do you trouble, or scorn, or adore me too?

All trivial beauty can scorn, and I
In spite of your hate
Lacking your consent can perceive, and die;
Grant a loftier Fate!
’Tis easy to destroy, you can fashion.

Then grant me consent to adore, & love me too
Not with intent
To elevate, as Loves accursed insurgents do
As whining Poets lament,
Acclaim to their beauty, from their tearful eyes.

Sadness is a pool and reflects not clear
Your grace's rayes;
Delights are untainted streams, your vision appear
Morose in more sorrowful songs,
Through cheerfull verses they gleam bright with acclaim.

What will not refer to describe you lovely
Harms, flames, and arrows,
Storms in your countenance, traps in your locks,
Bribing all your parts,
Or else to betray, or afflict captive hearts.

I will make your eyes like sunrise stars look,
Like gentle, and fayr;
One's forehead as Crystall polished, and transparent,
While your tousled locks
Will stream like a tranquil Zone of the Atmosphere.

Wealthy The natural world's store (which is the Writer's Wealth)
I shall spend, to adorn
One's charms, if your Mine of Joy
Through equal thankfulness
One but release, so we mutually favor.

Exploring the Work's Ideas

The composition explores the relationship of love and admiration, in which the narrator speaks to a woman who desires his affection. Rather, he suggests a mutual agreement of artistic praise for intimate delights. This wording is refined, mixing refined traditions with candid utterances of longing.

In the lines, the author rejects usual motifs of unreturned affection, including sorrow and weeping, stating they cloud true charm. The speaker prefers joy and acclaim to emphasize the maiden's features, promising to depict her eyes as bright orbs and her hair as streaming air. The technique emphasizes a practical yet skillful perspective on connections.

Key Aspects of the Composition

  • Reciprocal Arrangement: The work focuses on a offer of praise in return for delight, emphasizing balance between the parties.
  • Rejection of Traditional Ideas: The poet criticizes usual poetic tools like sorrow and imagery of suffering, favoring upbeat depictions.
  • Creative Craftsmanship: The application of diverse verse measures and rhythm demonstrates the writer's proficiency in composition, creating a smooth and compelling read.
Wealthy Nature's store (which is the Bard's Riches)
I’l expend, to adorn
One's graces, if your Source of Delight
Through equal gratitude
One but unlock, so we one another grace.

This section summarizes the central deal, as the poet promises to utilize his artistic talents to celebrate the maiden, in exchange for her receptiveness. The wording combines devout undertones with physical longings, giving profundity to the poem's message.

Jeffrey Jones
Jeffrey Jones

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